Project 2: Final Draft Changes

For this assignment, I felt that only had to make a few changes to the final draft. Sometimes when we read our own writing, we feel that it flows perfectly, so it is good to have someone else read it and get their opinion. Doing this, I was able to change a few words around so that it is easily read. Too often, I find myself making the same grammar mistakes. So I hope that the more people I get to read my writing, the more often I can prevent these mistakes. Also, on the actual word document, I had to double space the sentences, because when I posted the blog post for the draft, having spaces would take up far too much room. I was also debating on whether or not to actually make a true “conclusion” paragraph at the end. The way I have it now, the last paragraph is about the last article I read, but at the end of the paragraph I have about 2 or 3 “conclusion” sentences that wrap everything up, and bring it all together. At first I thought this could possibly be a bad thing, but then I felt that since the whole paper was about the same topic, it would still fit together nicely. Overall, I really didn’t have to change that much, as I really tried to make it best as possible on the first draft.